Friday, April 22nd 2005 - [278]Brisbane's Story (11 of 12)
Kimberly
Brisbane
Serious talk

Original Commentary

The more text you get, the less comments we can write. So, well, Brisbane is going to his room. A year or so ago, we mentioned that the bedrooms have individual keys. There was going to be a plot that involved that as a major element, but things took a different direction. I may come back to it, but it's been a long time since I introduced that element and it seems unfair to bring it back after so long - Terrence

Modern Commentary
And Kimberly totally whiffs it. On one hand, she's not in Sales mode; she feels completely comfortable giving her natural first response. On the other hand, yikes.

Unlike Minerva Kimberly would have tried to sell him something to help boost his confidence and his luck with the ladies.

End-of-YSiF Kimberly would've tried to comfort him.

Right now, she's kind of between things and her personal, unguarded self is kind of a mess right now.- Terrence

 
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