Wednesday, May 11th 2005 - [294]A Picnic in the Park (9 of 23)
Original Commentary
When I drew this comic, I had a slightly different script than the one posted in the comic... in it Kimberly had no real idea that she was being so sneaky about things, but this way just leaves it implied. I ended up messing up Brisbane's eyes in the second panel, so I digitally added in new eyes I drew elsewhere on the paper. Behold! The magic of technology! -Isabel
Modern Commentary
If we had this to do all over again, I would've tried to come up with a slightly better plan for Kimberly and I would've made sure that Emily really deserved it. I mean, for something she did lately. She tried to break Brisbane and Kimberly up but that was a while ago. Kimberly was still carpooling with Emily after that. They went to her Halloween party. If Kimberly is doing this as payback, it should be for an specific thing, not just for Emily being Emily in general.
And trying to keep Emily and David away from each other isn't a good plan. It doesn't even rise to the levels of being a bad plan.
- Terrence