Thursday, May 19th 2005 - [301]A Picnic in the Park (16 of 24)
David
Kimberly
Brisbane
Deja Vu

Original Commentary

Both comics are going for that whole parallelism thing today, aren't they? That's the thing is, it's been made quite plain what Emily thinks of Brisbane, but her opinion of Kimberly is, well, more complex. And David just wants to make friends. That's the thing is, whenever we have parallel characters (like David and David) there are major differences between them. SP-David keeps screwing people over for no good reason. YSIF-David doesn't, so far - Terrence

Modern Commentary
Kimberly's just here to cause chaos and if that means she doesn't get invited to more picnics, that's just an added bonus.
She's not surprised that Brisbane made a new friend, because that's what Brisbane does when you leave him alone in a crowd of strangers.
I like the basic structure of this story, I just wish I had come up with a better plan for Kimberly than "hide the food at the picnic". It's not really funny enough or destructive enough or creative enough. - Terrence

 
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