Friday, May 20th 2005 - [302]A Picnic in the Park (17 of 24)
David
Brisbane
Kimberly

Original Commentary

Again, with the parallel themes of: talking about people behind their back. They're not always as far away as you think. Being around Kimberly tends to bring out the worst in Emily and vice versa. I'm trying to expand on a general theme of friendship this year. I think Emily, without Kimberly or Brisbane, is much more pleasant than we've seen her lately - Terrence

Modern Commentary
...why would Kimberly have David get her a croissant? Kimberly knows where they're hidden because she's the one who hid them there.

I kinda wish I had written something about Brisbane finding Kimberly's plan out, not really caring since he doesn't like Emily, and then - after meeting David - trying to get Kimberly to behave since otherwise he'll probably never get to hang out with David again.- Terrence

 
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