Thursday, July 7th 2005 - [343]Coffee Break (4 of 17)
Brisbane
Robert
Questions

Original Commentary

Now we finally get to the root of the issue that I've been trying to work in for the last few months. I actually introduced Jane and Robert with the intention of bringing a second romantic relationship into the comic. It just took me a while to actually get to this point. Robert's second line got expanded significantly when I was lettering this, so that it explained more and moved the plot forward; originally it was along the line of "we used to go out in high school". I especially like how Brisbane feels that he's giving genuinely useful advice - Terrence

Modern Commentary
Things are more complicated than they initially appeared. Brisbane, like the audience, reacts the way he reacts because he doesn't know the whole story. - Terrence

 
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