Thursday, July 7th 2005 - [343]Coffee Break (4 of 17)
Original Commentary
Now we finally get to the root of the issue that I've been trying to work in for the last few months. I actually introduced Jane and Robert with the intention of bringing a second romantic relationship into the comic. It just took me a while to actually get to this point. Robert's second line got expanded significantly when I was lettering this, so that it explained more and moved the plot forward; originally it was along the line of "we used to go out in high school". I especially like how Brisbane feels that he's giving genuinely useful advice - Terrence
Modern Commentary
Things are more complicated than they initially appeared. Brisbane, like the audience, reacts the way he reacts because he doesn't know the whole story.
- Terrence