Tuesday, July 12th 2005 - [347]Coffee Break (8 of 17)
Brisbane
Robert
Problems

Original Commentary

I am trying to get across Robert's lingering feelings for Jane, his deep fear of disapproval, and his utter mortification about whatever happened in the past. There are some arcs, when I look back I feel that I only accomplished about half of what I set out to actually do. I'm trying my hardest to make sure that this isn't one of those. I can get so caught up in trying to get all the moments right that there isn't enough time for me to get in all the moments I mean to - Terrence

Modern Commentary
And Robert becomes properly Robert. More specifically, he's paralyzed by shame. He wants to do something - anything, but he can't. And Brisbane wants him to choose something so Brisbane can help him do it. But he won't, at least not yet. - Terrence

 
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