Sunday, August 7th 2005 - [369]Casual Warfare (12 of 12)
Brisbane
Kimberly
Expense Account
Ms. Taylor
Miz Taylor
Brisbane's Small Victory
Best-Laid Plans

Original Commentary

I really like how this comic turned out. Ms. Taylor's expression subtly changes between the second and third panels. And while Kimberly might have been able to get the credit card, she would've definitely gotten the warning - Terrence

Modern Commentary
I remember we had a long discussion about the brand name of the store. JB Copper is a mid-range department store that's not entirely dissimilar from JCPenney. I'm always tempted to just choose a real brand name to get the point across.

But then, doing it the other way is why we have Final Battle Adventure Online.

Neither Brisbane nor Kimberly are making great money here. I'm not sure if Kimberly could've afforded a new business suit. She might have saved some of the money from her online sales, but expenses always come up... - Terrence

 
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