Tuesday, November 15th 2005 - [447]Date-night in (18 of 34)
Original Commentary
I ended up tweaking the script to this comic the entire day. There were little changes, like adding a little foreshadowing (not telling where, sorry :P), an explanation for why Robert was not surprised to see Brisbane at his door unannounced (first panel) and making him look a little more clueless over all (the entire comic). Roberts a funny guy- he makes a guy like Brisbane look more together (of course, right now Brisbane is falling apart, but, well, every other time Robert has shown up he has). I'm sure Robert hasn't even noticed Brisbane's box, considering there are so many in his place already. -Isabel
Modern Commentary
Dude wasn't expecting company but Robert is up for an in-person LAN party. It's the weekend and his schedule is flexible. Again, no cellphones which is why Brisbane didn't call ahead. - Terrence