Wednesday, March 15th 2006 - [538]Relationships: part two (9 of 18)
Original Commentary
Yet another of the "Isabel draws it then I write it" comics. I got the timeline I referred to yesterday hammered out. In the process, I struck two years off of Robert, Jake and Jane. I had them down as 25, 25, and 23 (respectively) but that didn't really work. Now they're 23, 23, and 21. So it's a timeline of the past six years. I feel better now that things are fleshed out.
And yes, this was the comic I had written out yesterday, more or less. Sofia's line in the last panel was originally going to be a thought, but there was a misunderstanding about the script - Terrence
Modern Commentary
The other waitress might actually be named Jane also. You never know.
Spoilers for tomorrow's comic: She isn't named Jane.
- Terrence