Monday, November 6th 2006 - [716]Moving Sofia (1 of 12)
Recommended Reading: Sofia
Mover co.
Sofia
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Original Commentary

Yes, she probably has things that'd cost more to replace than the apartment is worth. I'm sure they'd be expensive to buy, but wouldn't sell for much at all. But no, if she were a woman of great forethought, she wouldn't've spent the last year living where she did - Terrence

Modern Commentary
The question "Would Sofia hire a moving company with no destination in mind?" isn't an interesting one. The real question is "Sofia has already hired a moving company. She does not have anywhere to go. Why has she done this?"

I wish we had spent more time showing how she got where she is. The place is a dump. The landlord is a creep. After serving her time here, the lease is up and she finally - FINALLY - gets to leave. And her first priorty is getting the hell out. The details are for later.

You can take a character anywhere. You just need to show how they got there. But it's been about a year since Brisbane moved into that place and some of our other stories have run long. - Terrence

 
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