Monday, November 6th 2006 - [716]Moving Sofia (1 of 12) Recommended Reading: Sofia
Original Commentary Modern Commentary I wish we had spent more time showing how she got where she is. The place is a dump. The landlord is a creep. After serving her time here, the lease is up and she finally - FINALLY - gets to leave. And her first priorty is getting the hell out. The details are for later.
You can take a character anywhere. You just need to show how they got there. But it's been about a year since Brisbane moved into that place and some of our other stories have run long. - Terrence |
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