Tuesday, January 30th 2007 - [789]The deal with Brisbane's folks (2 of 7)
Original Commentary
I ended up doing a few really small last minute tweaks, little things like changing "love" to "like in the middle panel, phrasing... things that would not really be missed- the really big tweak I made was to Brisbane's like. originally he was going to say "Only problem is, I'd have to be there". I felt that was almost an immature thing for him to say. And, while I'm sure quite a few people feel like kids around their parents, Brisbane isn't really one of them. I'm sure he's had a lot of time to think about how he would explain all this to Kimberly, but didn't want to be the one who brought it up.Ok, make your own "he didn't want to say it first" jokes here... or maybe I just made it. -Isabel
Modern Commentary
It's never been foreground until now, but Brisbane hasn't been in contact with his parents during the course of the comic. The relationship just isn't there.
- Terrence