Original Commentary

I try not to make the characters too much like myself or Terrence... but that first panel there is such a Terrence thing for Brisbane to say (don't worry, there's nothing to that...)

I actually ended up flipping the first panel horizontally because the character were facing the wrong way (something I usually try not to do, but I think it worked out ok). I ended up changinag the last panel to this comic as well, as I wasn't to found of the last one.

This was the original script:
K- Desperate?
B- ...um... I was thinking more hopeful. But whatever works for you.

It made Kimberly sound way too much like she was just settling for Brisbane, while in the current draft, she's just plain horny (which is what I had originally wanted to change her line to... but YSIF has a little more class, at least more than ND). -Isabel

Modern Commentary
Yeah, if Brisbane wasn't so Brisbane, Nicole would have been two years older...

It was entirely Brisbane's idea to try to build to the perfect moment; Kimberly always was the practical one in that relationship. - Terrence