Thursday, March 15th 2007 - [815]Lola's secret (4 of 12)
Brisbane
Lola
panic
larceny
shopping

Original Commentary

This was what the arc was leading to the whole time. The hard part was explaining why Brisbane would have his wallet out but not be paying attention to it. I asked Isabel what's behind the counter at hardware stores, she suggested spray paint - Terrence

Modern Commentary
Yeah, this is a local shop. The big box hardware stores all have their spray paint locked in a cage these days.

I think part of this was that I wanted to do an action sequence. When I write, I usually think in terms of dialogue, occasionally with various business in the background. From there, it's up to Isabel to figure out how to make the pictures interesting. I'm a bit jealous of folks who do exciting, dynamic staging so I wanted to do something that was centered around an action sequence- Terrence

 
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