Original Commentary

I had to ask Terrence to rewrite this comic originally, the poor dear. I just wasn't understanding the conversation and he had to explain it to me a lot... now, I'm not very bright and he is, which might have been part of the problem... but if I didn't understand it as the artist, how can I draw it? So he dumbed it down for me. -Isabel

Modern Commentary
If I had to redo this comic, I would've cut a few details from the first panel. Kimberly is explaining things that Brisbane already knows that won't directly come in to play. If "Dennis Brown" is a reference to something, I've forgotten it.

But things aren't always linear and straightforward. That's how life is.

Kimberly caring about how the employees are doing and knowing their names and situations? That's Brisbane rubbing off on her - Terrence