Original Commentary
Another comic I completely screwed up on- although this one wasn't as big of a deal; Miz Taylor was supposed to have been walking in at that moment behind the two. Although I do love panel three... that makes it all worth it. Poor Terrence, one of the few times he gives me directions, two comics in a row even, and I didn't read them properly. Poor guy. -Isabel

Modern Commentary
Firstly, yes, the first panel probably took a little inspiration from the recurring phrase "the world is quiet here" in A Series of Unfortunate Events.

Secondly, the script I have says "[The door opens. Ms. Taylor is there]" for the second panel. Did I write something else initially then change the directions to match the art? If so, why? It's already been drawn. No further instructions are needed.

Thirdly, I'm sure for the first few days Kimberly and Brisbane were sure to put everything back neatly but after a week or two, they're leaving their stuff out because they expect to be doing the same thing tomorrow.

Fourthly, I don't keep count, but this is one of the very few times that Kimberly calls her "Mom" rather than "Mother" - Terrence