Wednesday, March 4th 2009 - [1424]Ten minutes (17 of 21)
Original Commentary
In panel three, Kimberly's original line was "K- There are more things in life scarier than ghosts." This is, of course, in reference to Nina, the "other woman" if you will... a symbolism of a choice Brisbane must make between reality (Kimberly) and fantasy (Nina). However, after the drew the comic out, I asked Terrence if Kimberly knew of Nina and he said no. I was a bit miffed at him that he had not caught that when I first asked him to read the comic over, so I had to do a rewrite. Terrence said that perhaps Brisbane mentioned Nina to Kimberly. I didn't think Brisbane was THAT stupid. For more info on Nina, check out the new and improved Unlike Minerva archive. UM is celebrating it's ten year anniversary as well. - Isabel
Modern Commentary
Short summary is that Kimberly thinks the library is haunted. And there's a mysterious woman there who likes Brisbane but hides from everybody else, so maybe she's right. Everybody (including Brisbane) thinks that Kimberly is being ridiculous about this
- Terrence