Original Commentary
Here was the original script for this comic:

[K steps out of a taxi in front of the Apt. building.]
K: Just wait here ten minutes.
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L: Hi, Kimberly - didn't expect to see you home so soon.
K: It's a long story. Did the mail come?
L: A few minutes ago. Why?
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[Lola is alone]
L: Kimberly?

It was good... it set up the plot and all... but it felt a little empty. I was considering having Kimberly mutter something to the driver about his mother also using a meter- but, you know, Kimberly isn't that kind of gal. Or rather, she wouldn't be to anyone's face... unless she was at a meting, then all gloves are off. Not to mention that she is depending on this person being there when she gets back from the apartment, so it's best to just be nice. -Isabel

Modern Commentary
I get a bit too caught up in showing every moment. We just had Kimberly say she was leaving the office to go to the apartment. Did we need to show her arriving at the apartment? I'm sure the readers could've figured it out... - Terrence