Friday, July 17th 2009 - [1555]Late Night (15 of 45)
Jane
Robert
Shy
cute

Original Commentary
He's so cute when he's naive. - Terrence

I originally was going to have a side view of Robert in panel three, but when I was drawing it out, it just wasn't working, so I just went with another face shot. At the least, it got it done. -Isabel

Modern Commentary
I remember trying to be very naturalistic in the dialog. Avoiding big cartoony moments and exaggeration. Show who characters were through subtle word choices.

I understand why I wanted to do that, but it's easier to do that if you're immersed in this world full time like we were, than if you just visit it for three panels a day. - Terrence

 
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