Friday, July 24th 2009 - [1560]Late Night (20 of 45)
Original Commentary
I'm not sure what Jane expected from Robert, but this isn't it. Jane has been waiting even longer for an answer here. -Terrence
Ugh- panel two came out so wrong... one of the issues with doing so many comics at once. Ah well. Hopefully within the next ten years of comics I'll improve a bit. -Isabel
Modern Commentary
I wish there was a bit more of a rising and falling motion in this storyline. It's not about the plot changes. Sometimes it's about the emotional changes between the character
Robert just keeps letting Jane down here. Perhaps there should have been moments where things almost work out, where you think that maybe he's going to get it together and be a helpful partner - Terrence