 Sunday, May 15th 2005 - [297]A Picnic in the Park (12 of 24)
Original Commentary
I had written a comic where Brisbane told David "You're Emily's boyfriend, right?" and David went into a speech about how he could be described as such but wouldn't want to be defined that way. It made him seem pointlessly oversensitive. Isabel suggested this, which works a lot better - Terrence Modern Commentary
It's David! He does exist, no matter what Kimberly says.
I just now realize that we didn't explicitly say that this is the last croissant. It is. That's why there's the polite deferral and why neither of them get a croissant.
So, really, Kimberly stealing the food is why David and Brisbane are friends.
In the missing script, Brisbane asks David if he's Emily's boyfriend and he says "No. I'm David. I'm going out with Emily, but that's not my identity. I just think that there's more to me than who I'm going out with.". Then David asks Brisbane if he's Kimberly's boyfriend ahd he says "Yeah, pretty much".
Eh.
- Terrence
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