Tuesday, May 24th 2005 - [305]A Picnic in the Park (20 of 24)
Kimberly
Brisbane
Emily
David

Original Commentary

After all this time, Terrence and I couldn't find a way for things to go any further, and there was nothing good or useful to come out of Kimberly and Emily fighting, so we decided they should just step away from each other to lick their wounds - Isabel
I like this because it shows David and Brisbane's friendship. I had considered having Jake come up and interrupt the fight before anybody could storm off, but, well, as soon as he walked away, we'd be right back in the same place - Terrence

Modern Commentary
Emily never realized that Kimberly was actively trying to ruin the picnic. No time for it. All of Kimberly's shenanigans didn't amount to anything, but I bet it made her feel better while she was doing it. I wonder if it would've been better if we had paid that off a little more explicitly.

Once Kimberly and Emily had this confrontation, this is how it had to go. They'd storm off and the party is over.- Terrence

 
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