Original Commentary
This was one of those "ping-pong" comics, we just hitting the idea back to each other, adding a little bit more to it each time, till we had a comic we liked. Unfortunately we were only able to get as far as the idea for the comic... I ended up writing the script for the comic while talking to Terrence over the phone this morning. I have a general idea about where this is going and I'll hopefully be writing more some time today. After Terrence saw the comic, he said it was what he envisioned, but it didn't seem to write out on paper well which was what was giving him trouble... a lot of comics are like that. -Isabel

Modern Commentary
And thus begins the lounge guys obsessing over Lola.- Terrence