Monday, November 7th 2005 - [440]Date-night in (11 of 34)
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Original Commentary

In order to stretch out the suspense a bit longer, panel three of today's comic was moved to Tuesday's comic and the second panel of today's comic turned into panels two and three... ok that wasn't the real reason... there just wasn't enough action in Tuesday's comic and I felt it worked better. Far less lop-sided. I'll try to have Tuesday's comic updated right on time to keep the suspense down... -Isabel

Modern Commentary
Nothing to add here. It's all anticipation. Sometimes you've got to create a moment.

Or, rather, you should always structure the comic so that folks want to see what the next strip will bring. Sometimes we're very good about that (usually when Isabel is writing) and sometimes less so (usually when I'm writing). - Terrence

 
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