Original Commentary

Isabel and I had another one of our competitive writing sessions for the end of this arc. Isabel actually came up with something useable. I had tried to adapt her notes during work, only to discover that I cannot write comics there. Don't feel comfortable doing it.

I lettered this comic. There are a lot of small changes, but no one big change. I don't know how to describe it exactly. Since the previous comic was Brisbane's monologue and this one is Kimberly's, it gives them very different tones. It wasn't really intended, but it works. - Terrence

Modern Commentary
That's one of the things about our joint writing sessions. You know how 3d vision works? Depth comes from viewing the same thing from two slightly different perspectives. - Terrence