Tuesday, August 8th 2006 - [651]The troublesome trouble of Ms. Taylor (43 of 64)
Recommended Reading: Old Photographs
Dan
Ms. Taylor
Kimberly
Hostile Takeover
New Character
Mr. Taylor
shareholders meeting

Original Commentary

Originally, Mr. Taylor's introduction line was "I don't believe my vote has been counted yet". That lasted thirty seconds before I realized how lame it was. I mean, it seems like something a superhero would say if he were Civics-Man and being written by a middle-schooler. He's been mentioned for three years now but never appeared in person. I needed to give him something better than that - Terrence

We're talking a lot about Mr. and Ms. Taylor's current relationship and how it will affect this arc. I want to start writing the next arc, but I can't until Terrence finishes this one. And a picture of Mr. Taylor was shown a while back in Old Photographs - Isabel

Modern Commentary
You see those two guys in green shirts in the first panel? The ones obscured by Kimberly's ears and the panel border? Minor shareholders. That's all that they get.

Kinda sad, considering the whole story hinges on Dan getting them to agree with him about the direction of the company - Terrence

 
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