Original Commentary

Originally, the comic was going to have one panel of Brisbane saying something and stopping himself, then Mr. Taylor, Ms. Taylor and Dan entering. But the arc has been going on a bit of a while and there's no point dragging things out right now. When I realized that I was at work, though, and didn't have my notes. I had a different version of this comic written out before. I kind of liked the other version better, but this one fits the previous comics - Terrence

Modern Commentary
Brisbane and Kimberly weren't involved in the big negotiations here, but they weren't ready to be.

I keep thinking of them as end-of-series Brisbane and Kimberly, who very much were ready to be involved in that kind of business.

And my notes don't mention the different version of the comic that the original commentary references. No idea what that was about. Sorry - Terrence