Original Commentary

I'm sure Brisbane's honesty will be his undoing... or at the least I'd think so. I'm sure it's the reason why Mr. Taylor, Dan and Mrs. Taylor voted for him (all for their own reasons, I'm sure) -Isabel

Ok, so I'm rehashing a plot point. I meant, originally, for Brisbane and Kimberly to have a pressing need for money, but I couldn't come up with a way that didn't seem contrived and a little too coincidental - Terrence

Modern Commentary
So, perhaps the denouement could have been at least one comic shorter. All this one does is get Brisbane and Kimberly into Dan's office.

And I hate it when you have folks just come up and tell your main characters how awesome they are. It never works. I don't like it when other people do it and I don't like it when I do it.

Sometimes you need to keep the count right for the week. I just wish I had done something with the punchline. But I was probably frantically writing as it was - Terrence