Original Commentary

The sofa (and the Kimberly ears) shown in that first panel were originally not in the comic... it wasn't until I started inking did I realize that she wasn't in view when she should have been.

Brisbane is a bit frustrated in that last panel... possibly a little mad and stressed out by everything falling apart around him. This is the first project for the company that he has been entirely in charge of and nothing is going as it should be... even the meekest of people can get frustrated when put into a corner. -Isabel

Modern Commentary
On one hand, I dig how Brisbane is doing something. He thinks a picnic will help people, and he wants to help them. Sometimes you have to make things a little magical for people.

On the other hand, it's taking a lot of his personal time and money and, even in a best-case scenario, would just be a handful of people milling about in a park and eating cheap food.

Kimberly is offering to help plan. She is not offering to help pay. - Terrence