Friday, August 24th 2007 - [939]The new guy (28 of 35)
Original Commentary
I had some difficulty getting Patrick's middle line just right... making sure it wasn't too condescending (but a little at the same time) but at the same time making his intentions a bit obvious.
I wrote out the last part of this week as well as the next of this arc. I had a few plans on what I wanted to do that Terrence wasn't quite sure how to set up some of the things I wanted to do later on, so I did it myself. -Isabel
Modern Commentary
It makes sense that Ms Taylor would be asking after Brisbane. He was asked to walk the new guy to the new building, not stop and talk to Dan to get two-hour history lesson.
This is where Isabel tagged in, which is good
- Terrence