Wednesday, July 16th 2008 - [1212]The Dance (8 of 24)
Jane
Patrick
Panic

Original Commentary

The original drawing for this thing is a mess. In panel one Sofia is a good inch above Jane... I think I was going to have her in the little "cooking wall" and for some reason it always makes her look taller... but decided against it. But it was enough to cause problems. But, it all worked out and now she is the right size, for Sofia anyway. The script for this comic got chopped and relocated, with Sofia's second line in panel one belonging in panel two... but I think it flows better this way. I ended up adding in Patrick's "About time" line last minute. Adds just a dash of awesome, which he needs every now and again. -Isabel

Modern Commentary
Docking their pay when they call security has to be illegal. And you know that someone is going to get hurt or killed and that's going to be really bad for business. - Terrence

 
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