Friday, August 15th 2008 - [1233]Chair Trouble (5 of 7)
Recommended Reading: The Letter
Kimberly
Brisbane
Ms. Taylor
Panic
Trumpcard

Original Commentary
In the original draft, Kimberly had the paper from her grandfather on her. After talking with Terrence, he decided Brisbane should have the paper (since he was the one talking about this). But as I was drawing, I couldn't help but wonder why they would just happen to have this piece of paper on them. Terrence came up with Brisbane just plain telling Miz Taylor this fact, without proof... which, at the least, shows that she trusts him. Despite the fact that this information is being used against her. -Isabel

Modern Commentary
And the big emotional moment comes down to math and percentages, once again...

Man, Kimberly is not happy with him here. He deserves the side-eye there - Terrence

 
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