Sunday, September 25th 2005 - [411]Kimberly's bad week (36 of 36)
Brisbane
Kimberly
Brent
Carrots
Tuna and Carrots
NOM!

Original Commentary
This is one of the first jokes we came up with in this arc - that it would only eat carrot-and-tuna sandwiches cut diagonally. Now, mind you it did steal a bunch of carrots a week or so ago. That's because it was really hungry then. Now, it's only kinda hungry - Terrence

Modern Commentary
We write a lot of things like that. Come up with a good payoff and figure out how to get there.

About half the time, I end up cutting the foundational joke. Either it doesn't quite fit where we ended up or we come up with a better payoff.

That's how writing goes. Have to kill your darlings sometimes. Can't always just keep things for sentimentality.- Terrence

 
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